! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *flings Of Sorrow *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *flings Of Sorrow *! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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yet I do remember the hoary stance of night
rolling spumes away into onshore
to heap of sands yet not unknown
history yet records reels of fire.

where are those tiding whelms from hide
speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing
whispering dew of roses basking in glow
moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity

mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow
night when chilled being chiseled of snow
do we ever know the eternity by reality?
rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

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a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

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a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

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a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

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Sherif Monem 09 June 2009

Very powerful poem buut what is the connecting theme Thanks for sharing.

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Naidz Ladia 09 June 2009

mystery uncover the fling of sorrow..a nice poem, expressive...sorrow? ..whew, i don't know how to prevent them..it comes when you're not ready, it stays and can't escape..hope i could find a place where sorrow couldn't see me..this is a good poem dear Dr Kar...naizz

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Duh Huh 17 June 2009

Impressive train of poetic thought. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 June 2009

very strong..full of emotions..sentiments... the depth is amazing and the thoughts are excellent.. expressing one's emotions into this strong, appealing piece.. hitting to the core... the flings of sorrow..the flings of uncertainties.. flows with depth... 10++++

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Meghan Pearson 14 June 2009

The depth at what you write is insane.. that was done amazingly :)

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Antonio Liao 12 June 2009

urges my nerve to listen and talk....the inner revolution experienced with in the my whole life memories.....a mystical poem..holding every lines to breathe beyond natural force.....each has to feel every lines....so deep....such a wonderful poem...God less

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L.P. Alexanders 10 June 2009

very moving poem, i like it so much keep up the good work and i invite u to take a look of my humble poems if time permits

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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