Fog Poem by Aqua Flower

Fog



Blocking my view
can't see clearly
hard to see beyond
afraid of crashing

Copyright © Aqua Flower

Saturday, August 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,fog,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 26 August 2018

Such a lovely write👍👍👍

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Kostas Lagos 25 August 2018

Going blindfold is a part of being in love. Thank you for your poem

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

I guess that is true. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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Carl Roussell 25 August 2018

The heavier the fog - the slower you go. You put lots of intensity in those four lines. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

You felt the lines precisely. The poem speaks not only about weather conditions but also conditions in a relationship. Thank you for commenting and for such high rating!

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