Foolish Girl Poem by Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal

Foolish Girl

Rating: 4.1


I am a follish girl
So look past what you see
My dark brown eyes are drooped
I haven't gotten any sleep
I'm pregnant, guilty and so full of shame
I didnt understand this lifes foolish game
I'm sorry for this terrible mistake that i've made
At the time i wasnt thinking
In the end nothing i had gained
Thinking of abortion
Thinking of my past
Thinking of my parents
How long will this last?
Kicked out of my own house
Roaming every street
Guy who got me pregnant
Dont wanna no nutin bout me
Wearing the same clothes
that i wore yesterday
Thinking of this baby
That will live what i have made
I am a foolish girl
So dont count on me for anything
Dont tell me your secrets and please
dont ask me for advice
Girl who never makes mistakes
But cant learn from a mistake made twice
Suggestions and answers won't or shouldnt ever mean
Please leave me alone..i wish i wasnt a human being
Look me in the eye and not this bump formin on my stomach
Look me in the eye and what i've done please forget it
Cuts on my wrist..have i waited to long?
Should i kill this baby and go on back home?
Guys dont look at me with after days how i look
One nite, one guy, my dignity it took
Foolish, so foolish this girl i've become
It's not this babies fault MY life should be done
I made the mistake that inside knew was wrong
In the hospital legs spread open tears running down
I feel the baby scramble and die from the needle
that peirced it's infant heart
Two spirits so close together yet so many worlds apart
I had an abortion i bet you never knew
Went to the hospital a sunny day during school
Yea i regret it and sometimes i wish i could turn back time
But for me it's my reality i guess im not such a foolish girl now
I realize i'll have to deal with your opinions and your remarks
You may look at me different but please give me another chance
I've forgiven myself and i'm trying to move on
So please dont throw my past at me
For i feel it in my innermost core
But as for me..i guess im not such a Foolish Girl anymore! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 May 2009

Wise poem...............from the wisest gurl..........God bless you.............

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foolish? ... not at all, more so, mislead, and confused...but no one is expected to be perfect, you make foolish decisions then you look back, and learn from them, which makes you a stronger and better person. nicely done, you are a very good writer.

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oh my my. i am soo moved. because this is so deep. i know how this feels even thought i'm not a girl. but this is so wonderful. i can't stop crying. i will give you a A+. keep up the good work young one.

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immortal Butterfly 03 May 2009

WOW That's all I can say...I was nearly brought to tears. You're good...Great...The best I've read. Keep it up.

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Slade Oriley 01 May 2009

This is a very deep poem as if it were a life experience. I think many people could learn from this poem. Keep up the good work.

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loNeLY AnGel 19 May 2010

nice poem..........

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Jennifer Dorsey 21 June 2009

I have 2 say WOW! ! I can relate 2 your pain in your writing, you should check out my Pain poem, I think you would like it, and be able to understand it! ! xoxoxoxo- Jen, Jennifer, or Just Me

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Sylvester Eaves 09 June 2009

very interesting piece to say the lest I love how you drawed me into your poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Beautiful composition, one who can understand- s/he is no more foolish. 10+++

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Saadat Tahir 26 May 2009

atta girl...way to go! I've forgiven myself and i'm trying to move on you said it...we all are the devils workshop sometime... an redemption is there for the taking....you are courageous and angelic for the force of conviction you display in the poem thanx for the share tc cheers

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