Try and UnDeRStANd mE ....i promise im normal
Chi Town
Explore Poems GO!

A Friend

Rating: 4.0

You wanna run away
but your trapped inside
Something so small a needle
couldnt hide
Theres no arms reaching
And no one to call
Your starting to feel so very small
You look up to the stars
And feel you wanna shine
Yet no one helps cuz to them you seem fine

You stand up in church
Read More

READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 04 August 2009

Your meditation on finding your friend while sinking feeling haunting you....welldone10

0 0 Reply
Vp Ramesan 04 July 2009

A friend is fantastic in imagination. Are you crucified or resurrected?

0 0 Reply
Jennifer Dorsey 21 June 2009

I like this one, I think we might have a lot in common.... or at least we write about the same types of issues! ! xoxoxo- Jen, Jennifer, or Just Me

0 0 Reply
Winnie Angel 08 June 2009

simply true! .....have liked it.

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

'You stand up in church and raise up your hands But inside you feel your sinking in sand'... well said, Little Girl...your words portrait hypocrisy and reality on one single frame eloquently...10

0 0 Reply
Fearless D 15 May 2009

nice

0 0 Reply

oh wow, this is indeed a very lovely piece, and i should thank you for sharing this... yes, he is an awesome friend, and i cherish him more than i can explain. thanks again

0 0 Reply
Eyan Desir 02 May 2009

good write Little girl top marks for you

0 0 Reply
Emily Core 30 April 2009

we all need a friend but that man is no friend to me but good poem

0 0 Reply
Jack Price 30 April 2009

DLG Good job and you give your reader hope in this rocky and ever changing world. Nice poem of inspiration and letting the reader know that they have Jesus.

0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/29/2021 10:51:54 PM # 1.0.0.666