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Foolish Girl

Rating: 3.9

I am a follish girl
So look past what you see
My dark brown eyes are drooped
I haven't gotten any sleep
I'm pregnant, guilty and so full of shame
I didnt understand this lifes foolish game
I'm sorry for this terrible mistake that i've made
At the time i wasnt thinking
In the end nothing i had gained
Thinking of abortion

Thinking of my past
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loNeLY AnGel 19 May 2010

nice poem..........

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Jennifer Dorsey 21 June 2009

I have 2 say WOW! ! I can relate 2 your pain in your writing, you should check out my Pain poem, I think you would like it, and be able to understand it! ! xoxoxoxo- Jen, Jennifer, or Just Me

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Sylvester Eaves 09 June 2009

very interesting piece to say the lest I love how you drawed me into your poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Beautiful composition, one who can understand- s/he is no more foolish. 10+++

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Saadat Tahir 26 May 2009

atta girl...way to go! I've forgiven myself and i'm trying to move on you said it...we all are the devils workshop sometime... an redemption is there for the are courageous and angelic for the force of conviction you display in the poem thanx for the share tc cheers

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 May 2009

Wise poem...............from the wisest gurl..........God bless you.............

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foolish? ... not at all, more so, mislead, and confused...but no one is expected to be perfect, you make foolish decisions then you look back, and learn from them, which makes you a stronger and better person. nicely done, you are a very good writer.

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oh my my. i am soo moved. because this is so deep. i know how this feels even thought i'm not a girl. but this is so wonderful. i can't stop crying. i will give you a A+. keep up the good work young one.

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immortal Butterfly 03 May 2009

WOW That's all I can say...I was nearly brought to tears. You're good...Great...The best I've read. Keep it up.

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Slade Oriley 01 May 2009

This is a very deep poem as if it were a life experience. I think many people could learn from this poem. Keep up the good work.

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