Shalom, shalom, my beloved
For your eyes only
Did I not traverse this far…
Crossing the mirage towards oasis
Through cobbled dark blithering dreary alleys
But with the scent of the jasmine in your love
I could fight with coup de grace, all those omnivorous sorrows
Sweep away those cobwebs of onerous burdens
And now be able to wipe the dews
On the rose of my cheek
Shalom, shalom, my beloved
For your eyes only
See what I will do…….
Among the chenille petals in the pimpernel of your love
Let me add my own among them
So that when you caress the chervil bouquet
The chartreuse will break the silence
And then my heart will be one with your estoteric fragrance
Shalom, shalom, my beloved
For your eyes only
This is what I wish…….
In the cosmogony of the numberless stars
I wannabe that lantern of ethereal light
The dazzling one among the brightest
So that, in the dance of the festival of lights
My heart will swing with enrapturous delight
And my life will be one, with your panoramic smile.
Anjali
07-03-2010
Wow. Not only for my eyes dear Anjali but for my heart also... Well done!
MY EYES MAKE LOVE WITH YOUR POEM IT'S NOT A POEM BUT AN ANTHEM ANTHEM OF LOVE WITH PURENESS YOUR POEM CREATES A VIBRATION IN MY HEART. WONDERFUL CREATION
shalom shalom dear poet, I don't know if you understand Hebrew but this what I know would fit this poem 'MaTovu' or 'O HOW GOOD'... nice write... good job... keep it up!
cosmogony of the numberless stars lantern of ethereal light your panoramic smile. Nothing more is really required to write a poem. So beautifully u write l get simply fascinated. No criticism this time. Only adoration and appreciation.. Fantastic work well done. Eyes are not here...... Read the story of the title..
This poem is very beautiful. If were ever to be married these would be the type of words I would want to hear. Bien!
Crossing the mirage towards oasis....beautiful lines....10 no thesis love was basis
Shalom, shalom, my beloved For your eyes only See what I will do……. Among the chenille petals in the pimpernel of your love Let me add my own among them So that when you caress the chervil bouquet The chartreuse will break the silence And then my heart will be one with your estoteric fragrance Wow...I'm simply speechless...superb write like always
What a timeless beauty this poem contains, that anyone at any period of time can borrow from you the style of expressions and the claims that bear the self confidence...
Strong, intense like a romantic whirlpool that captures the senses, dreamy like a cloud floating on the verdant green hills, passionate like a love poem should be..... Wow is my word.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pregnant with passion that engages the eyes and hightens the heartbeat of poetic satisfaction. Excellently expressed my friend.10+++++++++++++++++++++++