Forget Me Not Poem by omar ibrahim

Nice poem. Flowers are nature's short-lived but frolicking children which delight mankind a while by fluttering their multifarious hues

Very nicely done. The rythm is just slightly messed up in the couplet, since always is usually accented on the first syllable. Again, I like your similes. Yet it is deep enough to make me ponder what you mean.

Alluring and ominous...my two favorite words. I loved it :)

Simply amazing. Very serene....i love it :)

so why do you always forget what's due? am I so bad that I shall not find you? .....nice n to be remembered//////10

..the pleasing mien of you still haunts my eyes though I must stay away from where love lies... oh, God has made a flower very fair your petals are too shiny for a bloom... Real Loving Lines! Thanks for the Lines and expressions! Siddartha Montik!

Again, a good attempt at the set form, it follows the script precisely, and shows how difficult it can be to get it right. 'I felt how fair you be.' This phrase could only be acceptable in the mouth of a comedic peasant! What 'flies' make it hard to see, in the context of the poem?

well written, Nature's daily blossom expressed in Flowers, yes slowl revealings thru the dew of early mornings! yes for a 9!

I concur the ending is very strong and makes the good poem. Excellent work.

well done! I like it