Forsaken Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Forsaken

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All the sanctity
buried in the heart,
A compassion,
centuries old.
Some strange sorrow,
without any grief,
oozes from the eyes,
in glistening drops
of perfect spheres.
With all the dormant emotions,
in their buried depth,
they fall on the ground.
Unheeded, join the stream of millions.
A dried path,
without any attributes,
decorated by indifference....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pooja Ladyluck 11 November 2008

daz da sorrow i was talkin bout.......wid no trace of its origin....still very painful.....though sumtyms.....senseless...strange.....still familiar in its own way....see....m confused......daz exactly da way i wud want to xpress my tht........u xpressed it b'fully......well.......u think better den wat i feel......thanx for expressing the unexpressed[ :) ]! ! !

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Anjali Sinha 06 November 2008

a little sad but nice poem ++++10 regards anju

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Tj Becker 06 November 2008

A sad but amazing write. Many tears are shed in a world of indifference. This is a masterpiece short but very meaningful. A true poetic work of art.

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Reshma Ramesh 04 November 2008

oh! ! beautifulll.....well penned

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Sebastine Humaemo 02 November 2008

nice piece of work....enchanting.....thanks for sharing...

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