I Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni


Rating: 5.0

They call me names,
They call me poet.
I am a simple fragment,
Of a forgotten thought,
Searching its essence
in the vagrancy of a pool of cognition.
Searching its roots in the consciousness of the universe.
I am lively,
but empty.
I neither live nor exist;
I am, I was and I will be.

Tj Becker 17 September 2008

I am a simple fragment, Of a forgotten thought, - What a great line. You have a style all your own and I really enjoy your works.

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Aijaz Asif 17 September 2008

another beautiful write mr.sarvesh, while reading your poem I remembered one I wrote ' Far Away '....thanks

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, aryaindia 16 September 2008

The birth of an entity before its finality is the largest conscious effort towards the success of recognition that belies it eventfully. Love your poems, very dear to the heart.......I enjoy your work, arya

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

Nice poem with a confusing conclusion, still that it is a beautiful piece. I love it and added 10.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

the depth of 'I'... gud 1..10

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

superb write in its meaningfulness and simplicity....10!

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Pooja Ladyluck 25 October 2008

I am a simple fragment, Of a forgotten thought, gr8 tht.....10+

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Gargi Saha 24 September 2008

A very humble piece. U get 10++++

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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008

Very good piece. Very poetic.

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