Fragile Poem by Bharati Nayak

Fragile

Rating: 5.0


Fragile, dainty my heart delicate
Falling apart
Under the heavy burden of silence
Getting brittle all my strength
Waning my faith by your derelict
Reduced to the state of despair
All my courage, all my valour

O' callous, o'indifference, o'quetude
Pity the soul, pity the spirit
The life essence.

Thursday, July 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: indifference
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was written years back and found in a notebook.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 July 2019

Under the heavy burden of silence! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2019

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your kind read and feedback.

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Susan Williams 04 July 2019

It may be written years ago but your voice in this is powerful and electric! ! ! Putting this on my fav list, 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Hey, go dip into those old notebooks again- there be treasures in those pages! ! ! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 04 July 2019

Hi Susan Williams, It is always a pleasure to see you in comment box and hear your cheery voice.

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

it is very heart touching poem, you are so bland and sensitive poet, wish no one break your lovely heart at all,10++

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

Pity the soul, pity the spirit The life essence.

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Muhammad Ali 20 January 2020

Silence, when unwanted, a vacuum one can't bear. Very nice and intense poem, equal opposite to the noise of Silence.

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Valsa George 27 August 2019

When there is indifference from those whom we love, our heart gets torn apart! We fall into a state of sorrow and depression! The intensity of your feelings of dejection can be felt by the reader in each line! Powerfully expressed! A 10

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Bharati Nayak 28 August 2019

Thank you so much Madam for your appreciation.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 July 2019

Full of emotions, feelingly expressed, and yet brilliantly penned.

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