Free Souls (Rubaiyat) Poem by Nosheen Irfan
Free Souls (Rubaiyat)
The world may soon perish
Your love, I shall ever cherish
A flowing river, don't let it stop
A little bit of heaven may drop
Enlightened, our souls feel
Inside the love's passion, we heal
Today sky has no bright stars
We are free from worldly bars.
Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Hi Nosheen, A beautiful poem on love. The imagery of flowing river and the 'dropping of a bit of heaven'. fantastic. The feeling of love and passion aptly captured in the simple images. I have read something about Rumi, and a few of his poems translated in Malayalam. His poems mostly are on love and separation, if I remember correctly. You could easily fit the poem in his style. The right choice of expression, form of poetry to express the feeling of love. Good. Keep it up.
Wonderful. I sincerely appreciate your innate skills. Long live your poetry!
Inside the love's passion, we heal Today sky has no bright stars We are free from worldly bars. Nicely described..
Wonderful song of Liberation. It shows how being a good person has rewards that sinners/criminals never trust. But hope and trust lead us to this happiness in being a decent human being. Keep singing your bright songs, Nosheen!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Outstanding duo, double dose of Rubaiyat on same topic is amusing....Loved it, Nosheen...Ramzan Kareem.
Thank u Asim. This is written in Rumi style.
Very nice. A great tribute to love.