Freedom Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Freedom

Rating: 4.8


The first step towards freedom
Love

Smile
Make it eternal

The last step
Love

(2008/11/7)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 07 November 2008

Wonderfully expressed, in so few words Shiraz! Best Wishes my friend! *10* Thad

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Seema Chowdhury 07 November 2008

nice thinking. thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Sinha 08 November 2008

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy so cute first and last step is loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee regards anju ++++++++10 i loved it

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C T Heart 08 November 2008

compact words of wisdom...a 10.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 November 2008

Freedom>smile>love. I really liked this equation..........10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 November 2008

And the message here, as i see it(aside from ''Big things come in small packages'') is: All that is good, in life...begins and ends with Love....Yes? Excellent Penning! FjR

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Chitra - 19 November 2008

a universal them a perfect equation to live by

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Linda Moore 17 November 2008

Very Nice.....Love is the answer to most of our problems it is the key to life.....10

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Lynda Robson 12 November 2008

The first and last step on the ladder of love, nice write, 10 Lynda xx

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Ramesh T A 12 November 2008

Yeah, love only keeps one free and smile keeps love alive!

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