Aabid Masroor

Veteran Poet - 1,739 Points (21/06/1992 / Kashmir)

From Your Memories - Poem by Aabid Masroor

Inclines- how much yet have I, to qualify long
Can I, but how to make, towards the inconstancy wrong
Though I smile and live sincerely there I have gone
From your memories and heart I do not belong

Would that I have died before this life
Or tell the same what man hopes where arrogance is rife
Hearts where- slaughtered with careless knife
This syndrome inside is full of strife

How I wish you would come back again tomorrow
In spring to bring sound to my heart that beats slow
Ahh- my winter nights grow longer with griefs and sorrow
when days I recall, we spend together tears would flow

Shadows, O my love -you played with eyes open wild
Games and tricks in your mind, like played with a child
That describes distances, with changes warm and mild
Gone from your memories, from deep eyes that smiled

Topic(s) of this poem: sad love


Comments about From Your Memories by Aabid Masroor

  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (8/22/2017 12:15:00 AM)

    With such a fine expression of the feelings of love, longing and parting, the reader becomes an eye witness of a sad journey. Thanks.
    Though I smile and live sincerely there I have gone
    From your memories and heart I do not belong
    How I wish you would come back again tomorrow
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  • Lantz PierreLantz Pierre (5/2/2017 10:44:00 AM)

    I was going to write something penetrating and erudite, but I forgot what it was. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (5/2/2017 8:12:00 AM)

    Hi dear Aabid, here you again as a selected poem from member..i guess your third or fourth this year...i wish you to have more in the future...you know why, because this poem is beautiful and many more from your collection. As i told you..you are talented, and many talented writers here reading yours...This poem is relatively telling about your heart to its high and low, in such a wonderful way of story telling...Congrats from me and keep writing great poems...No one know what future holds but we are who decided..so decide yours to be bold using pen in hands! . -Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Clarence PrinceClarence Prince (5/2/2017 8:03:00 AM)

    Memories, oh memories, they will always lingering with us! (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (5/2/2017 7:52:00 AM)

    Emotionally strong poem. The pain of a broken heart so beautifully composed in verse.
    How I wish you would come back again tomorrow
    In spring to bring sound to my heart that beats slow
    Ahh- my winter nights grow longer with griefs and sorrow
    when days I recall, we spend together tears would flow... is so nice.
    Thanks for sharing and congrats.
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  • Aabid MasroorAabid Masroor (5/2/2017 7:09:00 AM)

    Thank you.... Everybody... Hava nice day (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (5/2/2017 5:01:00 AM)

    Before this life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (5/2/2017 4:32:00 AM)

    So beautiful and heartfelt- the expression and the feelings of a broken heart. Thanks.
    .........days I recall, we spend together tears would flow
    Gone from your memories, from deep eyes that smiled
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  • Tom Allport (5/2/2017 3:10:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem of the loss of a loved one that is full of personal regrets also? .........well written. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (5/2/2017 12:19:00 AM)

    From deep eyes that smiled..... congrats on being chosen... a perfect 10.... (Report)Reply

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  • Roseann Shawiak (2/22/2016 8:56:00 AM)

    Memories are often bittersweet, yet we cannot let them go in times of sadness. Eyes filling with tears of love and joy that are now lost pierce our hearts with their loss. Very intense and melancholy poem, filled with feeling and emotion. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (2/8/2016 3:06:00 AM)

    Memories help us to move on; as we learn along. Nice work. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 26, 2016



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