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Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers

Rating: 4.1
Believe me, I run from dying
I know, it's so dumb, but funny trying
WAR, around me everywhere
SOLDIERS, killing everyday, I swear.
Truly, I have nothing to fear
Because when I look in the mirror
I see myself with no hair
A jock, playing, fakinit, like its there
I know... you hate that, my dear
Made your point of view Claire
Telling me, if I show up, you will run out there
Hiding from me, on your feet, downstairs

Anyway, sweetie, anyway, truly I don't care
Whatever you say honey, you love me
With your smile you illuminate my world
You can't imagine my happy feelings,
whenever I tell you, that, without you,
my life has no meaning at all

I love myself, maybe, but I've loved you before
Knowing in your heart Im not outdoors
Because you love me too and I am sure
I Hope, my life is long, because we are made for it
You are what a man wants from this life and more
I love you, its true and beautiful
So let us live our magic story


All thank to My dear friend Cruz
Wednesday, January 11, 2012
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In war, with death all around me, like every human, I had this moment of loneliness.
So I try to entertainment myself by speaking too, dumb like.
I imagine my love with me.
PS- She hates it, when I shave my head; Oh, Oh, she says I look so Ugly! xD
I hope you enjoy reading it...
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COMMENTS
Sam Chester 30 March 2017
i do enjoy reading the poem i am going to use it for my poem project
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Jeanette Telusma 14 September 2012
Beautiful......... I pray that your okay.
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Alufa Oke Joshua 25 August 2012
nice poem and this poem shows your love for poetry and we appreciate your effort. Thank you. Keep it up
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Maria C. Pires Costa 25 February 2012
Within a complex war environment, and being far from a beloved one, must be so complicated and sad. You have managed to create a lovely thread in which you expressed your feelings and above all your hopeful spirit towards living your story of magic... or magical story. Wishing you a long, happy life!
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Romeo Della Valle 15 February 2012
This is a very spiritually and humorous touching write that clearly shows your poetic talent and I thank you for sharing this amazing piece with me and the rest of the World! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! Note: whenever time permits, please check out my webpage and let me know how you like it. It will be highly appreciated! at: www.romeodellavalle.com Type at the top of page URL address...Thank you!
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Mohammed Albalushi 27 January 2012
very wonderful poem, i enjoy reading it, thanks 4 sharing
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Brian Purdy 24 January 2012
Molay, the heart and soul of you comes through this piece of writing. Whatever it lacks in the area of poetic sophistication is in largest part made up for by your spiritual good health, sincerity and humor. It would be a shame if you did not continue to write.
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Makhosonke Dhlamini 24 January 2012
A great piece of that you have wrote, I have enjoyed it, thank you for inviting me.
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Hans Vr 23 January 2012
The warm feelings of being with your love in imagination with the cold war around you. Very nice contrast. Excellent poem. I like it very much
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Ace Of Black Hearts 23 January 2012
Its excellent poem I would go over it again check it for mistakes.
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