Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers Poem by Molay Toufik
Funny Wear, Steel Soldiers
Believe me, I run from dying
I know, it's so dumb, but funny trying
WAR, around me everywhere
SOLDIERS, killing everyday, I swear.
Truly, I have nothing to fear
Because when I look in the mirror
I see myself with no hair
A jock, playing, fakinit, like its there
I know... you hate that, my dear
Made your point of view Claire
Telling me, if I show up, you will run out there
Hiding from me, on your feet, downstairs
Anyway, sweetie, anyway, truly I don't care
Whatever you say honey, you love me
With your smile you illuminate my world
You can't imagine my happy feelings,
whenever I tell you, that, without you,
my life has no meaning at all
I love myself, maybe, but I've loved you before
Knowing in your heart Im not outdoors
Because you love me too and I am sure
I Hope, my life is long, because we are made for it
You are what a man wants from this life and more
I love you, its true and beautiful
So let us live our magic story
All thank to My dear friend Cruz
So I try to entertainment myself by speaking too, dumb like.
I imagine my love with me.
PS- She hates it, when I shave my head; Oh, Oh, she says I look so Ugly! xD
I hope you enjoy reading it...
I do not know what it is to live through war, I've been only a spectator from afar. I would imagine it is lonely and the fear would get to me certainly. I know that the thought of the one I desire and love would comfort me as well. This is a very good poem. Great expression. I think your broken english coming through adds an ingredient that is only you. Keep writing. A+
What a beautiful and lovely poem. Very sweet. :) It's fantastic.
i do enjoy reading the poem i am going to use it for my poem project
nice poem and this poem shows your love for poetry and we appreciate your effort. Thank you. Keep it up
Within a complex war environment, and being far from a beloved one, must be so complicated and sad. You have managed to create a lovely thread in which you expressed your feelings and above all your hopeful spirit towards living your story of magic... or magical story. Wishing you a long, happy life!
very wonderful poem, i enjoy reading it, thanks 4 sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 6:26:45 AM # 1.0.0
Its excellent poem I would go over it again check it for mistakes.