A merely striking beauty akin to a pomegranate bud,
colourful but dark inside is not hard to find-
fine is that rare gem made of'be what you seem'
like the first born babe's ice-clean smile
alike in and out in sincerity.Such transparency
alone exalts society to spiritual integrity
and man above human weal and woe.This victory
of truthful self essence in man is the devotion
of all faculties that bow in reverence to it
and the remembrance of personal
accountability.Sad, dark hearted man of reason
seldom fairly understands it and more rarely
abides by it though it's finer than a universe
in kind!
There is such purity in the natural smile, a true gem which should be valued above other things. This is one of your best poems, Yoonoos.10++++ and in my favourites
Excellent poem. One of your best.Very profound in meaning which you always write. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
A beautiuful and well composed poem..Sparkles with philosophical thought enjoyed thanks.
Understaning the gem! A thoughtul and inspiring write..Nice to share.
" Such transparency alone exalts society to spiritual integrity and man above human weal and woe" Really amazing write! ..10
Rare Gem as to the first born babe's ice clean smile Loved the beauty of rendering the essense of life!
Thought is the soul of a poem but in my humble opinion a blank verse is not poetry rather it's prose.
Very nice poem, with such a big nucleus of wisdom inside it. In and out, the same, fully transparent, what a gem! Excellent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A well crafted brilliant blank verse, sir Yoonoos..10+++