When the sun rose bright and high in the sky,
It looked around with its far-reaching eyes,
To spread its radiant light with flamboyance,
To bestow its colourful energy with benevolence.
The Sun looked down and spotted the Earth,
This is the place he decided to bestow with mirth!
The Earth stood with her arms thrown open and wide,
To embrace the rays of light with genuine warmth!
The Sun sent its brilliant rays - Not just
To the surface of the earth with trees and flowers,
But it penetrated deep down inside the earth,
To discover stones hidden deep down in darkness.
The stones woke up with the illuminating rays of light,
They vibrated and whistled a tune with delight,
They rolled with joy to be able to light and reflect,
They danced with happiness as they could heal and brighten!
3) thank you so much Dr. Geeta for your immense beautiful poem, with the prettiest end rhymes and sublimest words. The fantastic picture added goes smoothly with the last line of your final quatrain. a WOW poetic panorama. God be with thee, my beautiful poetess and thy beloved family, long time no see, fondest Sylvie
2) a poem full of poetic gem created with loving care and flare, I am aware having read this most beautiful poem, in this Dutch 07: 17 hours in the earliest morn,
1) Most beautifully conveyed, magically worded and brilliantly presented. I have enjoyed enormously this poetic gem of the healing stones. The loveliest phrases created, wrapped in extravagant elegance I am ablaze for your sublimest phrases, a poem full poetic gem,
o spread its radiant light with flamboyance, To bestow its colourful energy with benevolence. lovely sunny picture with such a beautiful sunny picture
The Sun looked down and spotted the Earth, This is the place he decided to bestow with mirth! The Earth stood with her arms thrown open and wide, To embrace the rays of light with genuine warmth! Dear Poetess nGita, this is a lovely poem. sun, earth, falling in love embracing the ray of light. imagination that ends in geuine warmth. tony
A good start with a bright theme...the whole poem is rich with fact and rhyme...indeed a good attempt at gems with a good description about how they are found and how they get their sunny beauty....inspiring informative poem....10/10
Exquisitely wonderful. The poem creates images of infinite beauty and also deals with conditions leading to the formation of gemstones under the crust of earth. Thanks for its unique poetic presentation.
When the earth welcomes and hugs the the genuine warmth of the sun it's energy penetrates to the depths and wakes up the sleeping gems. A wonderful imagery....10
beautiful poem penned on the earth; yeah the earth is the superb safety lap of mother; its sun, its moon, its days and night, its rivers, its seasons, its forests, its mountains, its stones and mud, its all animals are supplementary each for others////
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
4) Have I not told you that I wish to leave here a 10 TOP score and much much more This gem ToMyPoemList InMyHeart.