Gently In The Morning Poem by Valerie Dohren

Gently In The Morning

Rating: 5.0


Gently in the morning
touch me if you will
tell me that you love me
when the day is still

Keep me close against you
just before the dawn
soothe away my sorrows
‘fore the day is born

Kiss me as I tremble
gaze into my eyes
let me feel you near me
when the night-time dies

Gently in the morning
hold me in the shade
when the bright sun rises
that's when I'm afraid

Wednesday, June 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 06 July 2014

A lovely write 'bout morning light May you have your loving squeeze all day long and into the night!

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John Brown 04 July 2014

It gave me goosebumps. Beautiful Val.

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Hans Vr 04 July 2014

Another masterpiece, Valerie. So smooth, so sweet and so moving. It changes really the composition of the reader, it mellows the heart, it touches our mind. This is excellent poetry.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Heartfelt poem from your pen. Your poem is cool and soothing to read. Loved it.

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2014

Sure it is your dreams will listen to you Val. Every morning has to be very fresh to us. May it be as fresh as the drop of a dew on a leaf for you Val. A good write on dreams.

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In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!

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In tender touching tones. Well done my friend!

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Dave Walker 08 July 2014

Sometime the quiet of the night comforts us. A wonderful poem.

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Sandra Feldman 07 July 2014

what can I say that hasn't already been said, ? I think I'll send you a top of the morning instead

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Hazel Durham 06 July 2014

A beautiful, subtle write about the harsh realities of life that at times we find hard to face, the shade comforts us from the glare of daily life! ! Outstanding write! !

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