Girls Are Helpless? Poem by survi sharma

Girls Are Helpless?

Rating: 4.9


We cry
and try
then cry
and never try

is it our story
we read
to gap the difference
though we are
helpless
and do not know
why?

do you think
in our country
we are worshipped
just after god
though we get pains
from evil sources

and i ask
do you know
why this happens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 28 June 2013

sad reference to girls. great poem. everyone deserves respect.

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 June 2013

An excellent poem. As a fellow human being I can understand the pain and the anguish that grills us from within. If you find time read my latest posting entitled 'An Introspection' and post your comments.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

Splendidly written..could feel the pain..voices to be raised.

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Mohammad Skati 21 June 2013

It's a cry voice against injustice. Fairness is required. It's a nice and simple poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

Don't have to worship, just respect. No one should be in a helpless situation. Touching words.

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Part 2. Contd… shun male chauvinism, get educated and earn a living of their own. Marriage and bearing children of the men who do not respect them, is not Life. There is a life outside. They have to find it and live it.

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I believe, girls have to stop crying. It is time they did. They have to move away from the male hierarchy,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Well envisioned poem so nicely presented.Girls are powerful but situation sometimes makes them helpless. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks Survi, keep the ball rolling.- - - 10

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Vineet Chhikara 26 August 2013

ahh a nice topic i would say and agree with you that girls are just said to be worshiped but the reality lies somewhere else....

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

girls are the creator i agree poet

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