Girls Are Helpless? Poem by survi sharma

Girls Are Helpless?

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We cry
and try
then cry
and never try

is it our story
we read
to gap the difference
though we are
helpless
and do not know
why?

do you think
in our country
we are worshipped
just after god
though we get pains
from evil sources

and i ask
do you know
why this happens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vineet Chhikara 17 June 2013

A nice write... keep on writing on social issues....

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Abhishek Mishra 17 June 2013

U writes of noble cause..may god bless u and hats off 2 u :)

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R.j. Wynn 17 June 2013

This one rocks too sissy! My heart goes out to you.

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Lateef Jan Afridi 18 June 2013

Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up

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Lateef Jan Afridi 18 June 2013

Nice poem dear. Yes we should respect the girls and women and to keep this fact in our mind that if we are today alive in this world is just becoz of women. Nice written, touches the heart. Keep it up

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Part 2. Contd… shun male chauvinism, get educated and earn a living of their own. Marriage and bearing children of the men who do not respect them, is not Life. There is a life outside. They have to find it and live it.

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I believe, girls have to stop crying. It is time they did. They have to move away from the male hierarchy,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Well envisioned poem so nicely presented.Girls are powerful but situation sometimes makes them helpless. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks Survi, keep the ball rolling.- - - 10

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Vineet Chhikara 26 August 2013

ahh a nice topic i would say and agree with you that girls are just said to be worshiped but the reality lies somewhere else....

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

girls are the creator i agree poet

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