We cry
and try
then cry
and never try
is it our story
we read
to gap the difference
though we are
helpless
and do not know
why?
do you think
in our country
we are worshipped
just after god
though we get pains
from evil sources
and i ask
do you know
why this happens.
An excellent poem. As a fellow human being I can understand the pain and the anguish that grills us from within. If you find time read my latest posting entitled 'An Introspection' and post your comments.
Splendidly written..could feel the pain..voices to be raised.
It's a cry voice against injustice. Fairness is required. It's a nice and simple poem.
Don't have to worship, just respect. No one should be in a helpless situation. Touching words.
Part 2. Contd… shun male chauvinism, get educated and earn a living of their own. Marriage and bearing children of the men who do not respect them, is not Life. There is a life outside. They have to find it and live it.
I believe, girls have to stop crying. It is time they did. They have to move away from the male hierarchy,
Well envisioned poem so nicely presented.Girls are powerful but situation sometimes makes them helpless. An intensive poem I like most. Many thanks Survi, keep the ball rolling.- - - 10
ahh a nice topic i would say and agree with you that girls are just said to be worshiped but the reality lies somewhere else....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sad reference to girls. great poem. everyone deserves respect.