No More Acid Bottles Poem by survi sharma

No More Acid Bottles

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you, the carrier
have you ever thought?
when you fly a bottle
on our soft innocent face
it really pains....
ohhh, how can you be so cruel?
don't you have
mothers and sisters?

when you do this to us
you burn both our beauty
and the way of living.
we are helpless
is anybody listening?
apart from these
devil bottlers
when you do it
you get pleasure,
we get pain,

since you too are
human beings,
i am thus appealing
with crossing my soft
beautiful hands
please stop it
just stop it
no more acids to our face
it really pains.

Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

Your appeal is very powerful. Human beings should respond. Keep writing.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 19 June 2013

Wonderful appeal should open the eyes of wicked people. I congratulate you for your revealing the agony.

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Unwritten Soul 19 June 2013

Yeah, we need to make a global law for this so it can make people beware of their bad action. Nice reminder and standing for the justice fight..always be strong_Soul

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Farah Ilyas 19 June 2013

Again a daring poem from ur side, yeah wickedness should be banned

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Pradip Dasgupta 19 June 2013

poem for a good cause.hope u will improve a lot

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

yeah, a great message is delivered nice one

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

a good strong write. this should be stopped. enjoyed

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Jenie Franksay 25 June 2013

strong, crisp & influencial. good work. love ur poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

A meaningful and nice write. Firstly, people who do these..are they really human beings? Do we actually know the meaning of Human being nowadays? Time to think..

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Mohammad Skati 22 June 2013

It's a nice poem and sad. It has a pretty message. I don't believe that there are people who throw acid on other people's faces. It's a crime. I denounce this criminal act.People should report this to the authorities immediately.I side with you. Thanks.

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