Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 27,969 Points (17.03.1965)

Giving Up - Poem by Lyn Paul

Am I getting closer
To piecing this puzzle
It was just getting harder
Harder and Harder
I felt pieces were lost
They just wouldnot fit
Giving up
But with alot of careful thinking
A little adjusting
Stepping away
Walking........
Breathing the air
Watching the waves
Covering the footprints
Then the flight of the pelicans
Creating their own puzzle
I knew then
My puzzle
Would be completed
I had come this far
So why give up on the puzzle
It is hard
Yes
But, Yes!
I will solve it



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Topic(s) of this poem: believe, hope, inspire, life, struggle, survival


Comments about Giving Up by Lyn Paul

  • Chinedu Dike (3/15/2017 8:23:00 AM)


    Faith keeps those that keep the faith - Mother Teresa. Lovely and inspirational. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Melissa Fleming (7/8/2013 4:02:00 PM)


    I believe that this poem is beautiful! Meaning it inspired me and it made me see things clearer. Comparing giving up to a puzzle, the fact that you basically put preserver and never give up in a form of poetry is great and you did a great job! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2013 10:31:00 PM)


    Inspiring, Lyn Paul... the metaphors are superb. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (6/24/2013 7:55:00 AM)


    The stofy of life. A lovely metaphor. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/22/2013 5:15:00 PM)


    Great metaphor for life. Well, done Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2013 3:41:00 PM)


    We are born to it, keep digging. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (6/22/2013 6:39:00 AM)


    I like jigsaw puzzles. They are relaxing pastimes. Your poem can be interpreted in many ways depending on the reader's fancy - I like it a lot! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 7, 2016


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