Ashraful Musaddeq

Veteran Poet - 1,233 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Gloomy Verse - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

1.0 Alone

Alone and alone – you are alone
We are with you – you are alone
Sun and moon – like you alone
O my beloved – poet you alone

2.0 One-way Love

Scarlet dream walks like an ant
Someone can feel others blind
Someone is special others hide
One-way love always confined


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  • (1/22/2019 12:37:00 PM)

    Lovely poem on loneliness. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/4/2009 3:25:00 AM)

    Alone and alone – you are alone
    We are with you – you are alone
    Sun and moon – like you alone
    O my beloved – poet you alone.....

    this one I can relate to myself or it is, I think so, : p....another beautiful and powerful write, in few lines the whole purpose of loneliness is defined and u did it very masterfully, in my thinking 'alone and alone' and 'One-way love' both are the same coz in both conditions you feel alone....thanks many 10'sssssssssssssssssss

    rgds
    asif
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  • (6/3/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    sharp and crisp in conveying an idead, .beautifull. posted 10
    love
    surya
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  • (6/3/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    One-way love always confined

    How can you tell so many things in so few words? I have to learn it from you.Luv - Brishti
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  • (6/3/2009 3:35:00 AM)

    aaalways to be alone is a sacrifice..grace (Report)Reply

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  • (6/3/2009 3:09:00 AM)

    yah! many things can't be seen but fell it in our heart...you unlock the
    wisdom of harmony and the courage to see...beyond the eye..wonder in the poem
    that touch the unseen of the heart...as the soul tremendously salute....your
    existence... makes us believed that you are one of its kind...a poet of today
    thank you....
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  • Smiley Hooker (6/3/2009 1:58:00 AM)

    very sentimental poem. but you'll never be alone with your kind poetry. like the sun and the moon, readers' heart will delightedly shine on you by the touch of your poetry. keep my smile: -) (Report)Reply

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  • (6/2/2009 8:42:00 PM)

    The heart of the lonely is full of missing people!
    10!
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (6/2/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    Yes it is true...scarlet dream alwqays walks like an ant...very good allegories used....10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/30/2009 9:26:00 PM)

    Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/30/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    Thoughtful somber verse with a charcoal truth. Reminds me of Eeyore. 'And how are you today, Eeeyore? ' said Pooh brightly. 'Not very how'. said Eeyore gloomily. 'I haven't felt at all how now for a long time.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • (5/30/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    Well written! A 10, nothing more to say!
    Take care, Martine
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  • Ency Bearis (5/30/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    true to verses...gloomy being alone..well presented... (Report)Reply

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  • (5/30/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    it's a very hard to be alone..grace (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/28/2009 1:43:00 AM)

    moon and sun is alone. it is the fate of man who is abandoned by his beloved. nice. shan (Report)Reply

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  • Sherif Monem (5/28/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    Nice sentimental poem.
    If you change the title of the poem to be more cheerful.
    Thanks
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  • (5/27/2009 10:26:00 PM)

    In my part of the world we might believe this poem was created
    on a lowering day. Gray clouds everywhere. But your
    moodiness works for you. Excellent write.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (5/26/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    Alone alone
    naaaaa
    Im not alone
    I know you are there
    with me
    I know you are there for support
    and love
    So I wont worry
    wowwwwwwwwww
    a lovely poem dear Ashraf
    a tenner from meeeeeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu
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  • (5/26/2009 2:46:00 AM)

    I feel alone before I came to this site...but I m feeling okay now..but when we keep looking at the past..always feels bad though 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • ~....my Life Is My Poem....~ (5/24/2009 2:41:00 PM)

    all words true...1.0 alone is very touching..! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 5, 2009


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