God's Promise Poem by Linda Moore

God's Promise

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Give us this day, our Father says to pray
Do not worry of tomorrow, I will keep you from sorrow
Place your faith in me alone
All your sins I will atone
It is me, The Great I Am
It is me, Savior of Man
It is me, take my hand
It is me, who can lead you to the Promised Land
I can give you Peace untold
I can give you streets of Gold
I can give you all you are hunting
I can give you Life without wanting
I will place you in my hand, safe and warm
I will make still, conquer the Storm
I will stand in front of you, my Armor Strong
I will deflect all that is wrong
The World is going where it wills
Do not follow, your Spirit it kills
Give your Soul to me this day
Flesh and bone does pass away
Come live with me for Eternity
I will Love you through Infinity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 25 May 2008

True! Well said! God is the Life!

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Kathleen West 16 August 2008

God's promise....is our hope.. amen.....good write!

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Lacey Unknown 19 August 2008

I love this. God truly does promise all of this and more to those who pursue Him. Thank you for this beautiful poem! ! God Bless! ~Lacey~

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 September 2008

Soul-warming poem....thanks for sharing.. ...and thanks for your comment..you noticed me though im just new here.You make me feel i belong.. God bless......

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Joe Breunig 03 July 2012

An enjoyable piece; loved the concept and message of this poem; nicely done! -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Andrew Blakemore 30 November 2008

Excellent work Linda, if only more people shared your faith the world would be a better place. Best wishes, Andrew

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Gutter Box 29 November 2008

Good poem...nice to know that their still are faithful and religious people out there. Keep up the goo work.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 15 November 2008

NICE USAGE OF RHYMES... AND A GREAT WAY TO EXPRESS THAT UNDYING FAITH N THE ALMIGHTY...

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Chris Newlash 20 September 2008

Awesome poem! I love that you rhymed it soo well! and thx for commting my poem!

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