Thursday, January 27, 2005


Rating: 5.0
I’m taking all the pain I see
And forcing the knife in farther deep
The blood I shed as I’m lying in bed
Loosing all the thoughts inside my head
I’m slipping in and out of breath
And soon I know I will be dead
You see me hurt you see me mad
But you barely see me when I’m glad
So I am telling you and its no joke
I die with no sense of hope
Goodbye to you
Goodbye to me
Goodbye, goodbye for eternity
Samantha Martin
Daniel Tyler 11 October 2005
I really like this Sam. It is sorrowful but not self-pitying. As someone of your age, I appreciate the sentiment very well and it's a sad but a beautifully conveyed one. Regards, Daniel
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