Grant Me Leave Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Grant Me Leave

Rating: 5.0


O God! Dear God! !
I know it's not a matter of right
but will You please be kind enough
to grant me leave.
Leave from the obligations,
that my beliefs,
my nationality,
color of my skin,
and,
my race,
imposes upon a weak man like me.
I am helpless!
I am in love of someone
whose beliefs,
whose nationality,
whose color of skin,
and,
whose race,
is different than that of mine.
Do You know who my beloved is?
It's none else,
it's You sweetheart.
I love you,
and I love Your entire family!

Friday, September 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 September 2018

Akhtar, such a lovely poem.........................

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 September 2018

O' Love, O' GOD Grant me, grant me in everywhere, in everything in belief, in live, in leave I want independence for sake of You and Your love cause Your only Creator of everything and everyone........... // great

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Kelly Kurt 22 September 2018

I, and many others love you too, Akhtar.

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Kostas Lagos 22 September 2018

They say that love conquers all but is it? A tough question that this beautiful poem asks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2018

Love of God Almighty is encompassing. His love goes beyond the range of limits. A thought provoking poem with a meaningful message. Liked how you twist the poem to make your love universal. The Poet shows in this write how deep thinker he is. Brilliantly penned.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2018

God grants love and that grants humanity and gives essence of living. Love transforms entire family. A nice thoughtful poem is brilliantly penned.10

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