Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Veteran Poet - 1,246 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Guests, Where Are You Dears? - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

It's been a long time since we are looking at the door
We are waiting for you, knock the door, then the fun things will be more

People from all around the world were invited here
They came here, lots of good moments were for us, we laugh to the edge of cry, we had no fear

Such a great time with the noble guests
The UN forgetful moments which were the best! ! ! ! !

We went around, hanging out with our families and see the unique places
Just we enjoy, just enjoy and enjoy, happy cases with brilliant faces

Time just was passing with a golden shape
That was called the humanity at that moment without a dim black cape

But those times just passed, the best time and the nice custom and those pure hearts
Which were so clean, they were a part

Now it's been a long time since we are waiting, we invite but the life is busy, why?
Why the people are sinking in an ordinary life and just cry?

We are here; we are waiting for those good times that you will bring
We will be happy to having you here again, which of you that wants it, then we will be happy like a king

It's my invite for all of you, who wants to come and makes us happier than everybody in this world?
Just tell me, by a simple word.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Well, it's a custom in our family that summer by summer, and new year by new year (the beginning of the spring) we will invite a guest from a part of the world to our City and country for a week, then we will show the guest the historical and natural parts of the city and guests will be familiar with our customs and our traditional delicious unique foods. (it's all free for the guest and no money is require, all is on us) But still we are waiting for a person to accept it, OK dear readers, if you wants to know more and be that Guest for us, Just send me a message in this site. I'm waiting for your message to give you more information and then having you such our guest
We are all waiting.

Comments about Guests, Where Are You Dears? by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Poetheart Morgan (7/21/2013 3:50:00 PM)


    Hello Poet! ! ! ! I am on the line! ! ! ! What a fantastic tradition! ! ! And lovely poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Captain Cur (9/3/2012 7:07:00 PM)


    There is no poem more important that the giving of oneself and family. You have offered yourself and family to a stranger to learn your customs and to feel the love that unites each seperate soul of your family. This is a very mature write and wonderful invitation. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/2/2012 12:30:00 AM)


    You still on, said it will be over soon as spring turn to autumn mood now hahahaha but anyway good luck for you...but i am sure there must be good places to visit Iran in new season, autumn....so hope you can get positive response too soon..._Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2012 2:23:00 PM)


    A great poem, and a great invite, If I was younger
    and did not have so many commitments over here
    I would take you up on your offer, but sadly I have
    too much to do, but what a fantastic thing to do for
    someone.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 26, 2013


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