Tear or taste of rain
Crawling into veins of heart
Ocean or saline
-June 28,2018 Chattogram
Thought provoking Haiku. Be it tears or rain, heart accepts it without any discrimination. Thats the beauty of heart. Loved reading it.
There are times when even an ocean of saline tears cannot lift pain from the distressed heart. Amazing haiku, Mahtab. This goes on myfavourites list.
I liked the use of the word veins, it give an impression that something is coming from the heart. Though all the veins carry dirty blood but there is a pulmonary vein too. Yes, there are so many sentiments but there in it is sentiment of love, as well. A great Haiku.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Tears of love and life! ! ! Facing the muse of the rain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.