Thursday, June 28, 2018

Haiku # 03 Comments

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Tear or taste of rain
Crawling into veins of heart
Ocean or saline
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2019

Tears of love and life! ! ! Facing the muse of the rain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

A heart touching poem nicely executed. Best haiku.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 July 2018

Thought provoking Haiku. Be it tears or rain, heart accepts it without any discrimination. Thats the beauty of heart. Loved reading it.

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2018

There are times when even an ocean of saline tears cannot lift pain from the distressed heart. Amazing haiku, Mahtab. This goes on myfavourites list.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 June 2018

I liked the use of the word veins, it give an impression that something is coming from the heart. Though all the veins carry dirty blood but there is a pulmonary vein too. Yes, there are so many sentiments but there in it is sentiment of love, as well. A great Haiku.

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