Haiku # 1 ‘kaiku Haiku’ Poem by Subroto Chatterjee

Haiku # 1 ‘kaiku Haiku’

Rating: 5.0


All haiku writers
Please take note and don’t do this:
Circumlocution


10th May 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 14 May 2009

Haiku should be crisp and clear Should spell the magic of words and logic, along with. The metrical phrase shouldnot pose like a - A roundabout figure of speech. Good Advice. Thank you.

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Thanks the lesson... I had to look up your big word! Karin Anderson

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

yeh taken note of thanks for the advice anjali

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 May 2009

yeah vvery true indeed..goood versee....and advise for haiuku riters

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Kesav Easwaran 10 May 2009

yes; that won't be haiku then...good kaiku, Subroto

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

........hmmm....? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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agree with mamta on this.....

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

arre haiku kaiku bombay mein rehne walon ko mere baap fursat kidhar hai

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Mamta Agarwal 31 May 2009

why only Haiku, all creative writers should avoid circumlocution, if they want to be understood. Haiku, because of its structure and norms, is a form which needs a lot of meditation before it flashes across your mind. then you say Eureka. we learn as we go good advise Subroto. you might enjoy my poem A pomegranate and a Haiku Mamta

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 May 2009

Wow Cheers 10

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