A dandy butterfly
Lands on a bunch of flowers
Kissing each in turn
Brevity is thy special attribute, Valsa! Only a few brilliant poets can write like this.
Your haiku captures the essence of the picture beautifully and the picture paints the beauty of your poem.
p.s. and to November's showcase it shall go, in due time. or is it do time, or dew time? do1 do͞o/ noun noun: doo 1. informal•North American short for hairdo. 2. informal•British a party or other social event. bri ;)
(cont.) , (again) i've visited this poem (2 yrs. ago) ! ! oh, well, i'll say more: Dalliance: noun: dalliance; plural noun: dalliances a casual romantic or sexual relationship. brief or casual involvement with something. or...Bri, I, say: a Dandy Alliance! to MyPoemList bri ;)
dandy, as a noun, can refer to a (man) : glamour boy; sharp dresser, snappy dresser; dude, pretty boy, etc. [[yes, like me, Bri]] it can also mean: an excellent thing of its kind. as an adjective it means relating to or characteristic of a dandy (see above) , OR [North American] an excellent thing of its kind. (cont.)
Beautifully painted the beauty of the poem as well the beauty of the nature through a dandy butterfly. Beautiful haiku ptesented.
Valsa, you have inspired me: A Dandy A dandy butterbri Lands on a bunch of girls Kissing each in turn well, almost as good as yours. :) bri
Ha... ha! ! With a change of two words, you have worked a magic....... but don't land on a rose bush... You are sure to be pricked! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short yet ever so sweet! . No one does it quite like you Valsa!