Valsa George

Haiku. Mist (5-7-5) - Poem by Valsa George

From the mountain top
Mist rises into the sky
Smoke without a fire

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku

Comments about Haiku. Mist (5-7-5) by Valsa George

  • Jez Brul (3/28/2018 4:07:00 PM)

    I could feel the cooling effect in my if I am in that mountain...lying in a hammock beneath the trees..lovely haiku!
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  • (10/12/2015 4:44:00 AM)

    Very well captured, great haiku,
    Thanks Valsa
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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/9/2015 7:56:00 PM)

    This nice haiku (10) reminded me of a old Malayalam movie song which I am attempting below in Haiku form:
    Hair of mist grayed
    Smoke of cannabis spread across
    On the distant mounts
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  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/8/2015 4:06:00 AM)

    You really have seen this. I have seen this too. But impossible to imagine that this beauty could be written so well. What is behind the mist? Why is the mountain quiet when the mist is smoking it...... very very nice.. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/7/2015 9:54:00 AM)

    I don't see smoke without fire s I am a victim of a fire without smoke. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/7/2015 8:04:00 AM)

    Exquisite one. Best Haiku. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/7/2015 6:48:00 AM)

    There is no smoke without fire is no more valid. Beautiful haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/7/2015 3:04:00 AM)

    And the volcano is inside...............Wonderful, yet another thoughtful haiku. (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2015 2:05:00 AM)

    Exquisitely descriptive
    Imaginatively free.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, September 11, 2015

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