Haiku- Rain Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Haiku- Rain



Sky driving wind mill
Aroused clouds causing lightning
Splashed water droplets!

02 05 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A nice haiku, enjoyed this piece.

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Chitra - 04 September 2008

a wonderful metaphor encapsulated in this haiku

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 19 June 2008

beautiful image, well done thanks for sharing 10

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Subbaraman N V 13 June 2008

Scientific truth well presented!

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2008

brilliant comment 'planz'! i add one more. haiku- she 'evaporated convert liquid to vapour emancipated! ' a haiku dedicated to you!

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Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

Creates a great image! Nicely done!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 March 2010

Perfect blend of WTD [wind thunder droplet] …but droplets are too soft to touch least injure it…indeed splendid… 10++ [heartfelt] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

your haiku speaks in volumes..great work! u amazing!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 March 2009

Sky driving wind mill, what a wonderful image, Kesav! It says everything else about rain even without reading next two lines. A quality haiku.....10/10. Regards Naseer

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2009

It grows as a cascade good Haiku, Thanks.

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