Sand dunes stretch endless
Eyes search far in hopefulness
An oasis to spot
Oasis for peace and love in a desert of deserted feelings to connect with zest for living! Superb Haiku!
The portrayal of the verb Search in imagery - - - - - - - - - and in mirages too? You do brevity that is succinct but also full-bodied. These word-images conjure up the real thing as well as paragraphs upon paragraphs and pages upon pages would have done- - better as a matter of fact. May we all spot an oasis in the deserts of our life. Beautiful write- -worthy of Poem of the Day and a million 10's
Life is itself a desert and a moment of love is an oasis. Beautiful poem.
Hope-fullness is searched through beauty of vision through eyes. This poem reflects thoughtful attitudes. An interesting state of expression motivates mind. A nice poem is beautifully penned.
A beautiful Haiku dear madam! I derive a great pleasure reading your poems! (10)
I try to praise less, most of the time when I read your words, and I feel wordless too. how to express a beauty, that is poetry, and if poem is so natural as a breath, how to comment! eyes are sentenced. masterpiece
Your three lines applies to everything in life, whatever we do; we are always looking for the 'oasis' that will bring us bring us accomplishment. Thank you for this profound Haiku.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oasis is the hope found in the desert. Beautiful haiku.