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Haiku... Time

Rating: 5.0

As granules of sand,
Funneled into deeper chasms
Time moves.... on and on!

Wednesday, October 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
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Binayakumar Mohanty 13 October 2017

A nice selfie with time's grannules of sand. Mam I enjoyed the Haiku. A huge 10++++is not enough. Please read my poem I fall asleep.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 October 2017

The hourglass of life keeps on tumbling...

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Muhammad Ali 07 October 2017

time moves on and on. no one can resist its friction. I mean not a single mortal being and inorganic universe. beautiful piece Valsa G

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Savita Tyagi 07 October 2017

Love it Valsa. Time funnels on never to return.

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Mj Lemon 06 October 2017

Valsa, this is such a gem. I remember my youth. I remember trying to hold on to that handful of sand....impossible! Time, like those sands, does definitely slip away.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2019

A beautiful and meaningful haiku is well executed and amazingly shared. I love this haiku for which i have visited twice.

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Loke Kok Yee 19 January 2018

But your poems will live on and on.........Thanks Valsa

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Akhtar Jawad 11 December 2017

A thoughtful haiku that has inspired me to write something.

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2017

a deluxe vacuum cleaner may help.............with the sand. i'm not sure i can help with the 'time thing'. bri :)

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Simone Inez Harriman 17 October 2017

I see the sand trickling and moving through the chasms...sometimes settling on a shelf for an eternity then moved along by the wind. A lovely haiku.

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