Haiku... Time Poem by Valsa George

Time goes on forward and so our lifes, but memories last deep inside.. Good one

Your poetic hand is mild upon my senses. Thanks for all do to my perception, mentoress. 10+++

A beautiful snap of eternally existing Time...Thank you Ma'am for the lovely haiku. Regards. Subhas

Valsa, this is such a gem. I remember my youth. I remember trying to hold on to that handful of sand....impossible! Time, like those sands, does definitely slip away.

Love it Valsa. Time funnels on never to return.

A beautiful and meaningful haiku is well executed and amazingly shared. I love this haiku for which i have visited twice.

But your poems will live on and on.........Thanks Valsa

A thoughtful haiku that has inspired me to write something.

a deluxe vacuum cleaner may help.............with the sand. i'm not sure i can help with the 'time thing'. bri :)

I see the sand trickling and moving through the chasms...sometimes settling on a shelf for an eternity then moved along by the wind. A lovely haiku.