As granules of sand,
Funneled into deeper chasms
Time moves.... on and on!
Your poetic hand is mild upon my senses. Thanks for all do to my perception, mentoress. 10+++
A beautiful snap of eternally existing Time...Thank you Ma'am for the lovely haiku. Regards. Subhas
Valsa, this is such a gem. I remember my youth. I remember trying to hold on to that handful of sand....impossible! Time, like those sands, does definitely slip away.
A beautiful and meaningful haiku is well executed and amazingly shared. I love this haiku for which i have visited twice.
a deluxe vacuum cleaner may help.............with the sand. i'm not sure i can help with the 'time thing'. bri :)
I see the sand trickling and moving through the chasms...sometimes settling on a shelf for an eternity then moved along by the wind. A lovely haiku.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Time goes on forward and so our lifes, but memories last deep inside.. Good one