Haiku … Summertime Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Haiku … Summertime

Rating: 5.0


Bright pink candy floss
The fun of the fairground rides
Those days of our youth.


Jayne Louise Davies

Monday, April 17, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: candy,fun,pink
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 April 2023

You took me back to those days of my youth Jayne

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

Nostalgia is a wonderful thing LeeAnn : ) Glad you liked it x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2023

A beautiful haiku dear poetess...loved it. Top score!

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

Thank you Dillip! I appreciate your kind comments x

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D.N. Rebb 17 April 2023

I don't know which is more nostalgic, cotton candy or small town midway rides. I miss them both

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

There is nothing so grand as the sounds of the fairground as a child : ) Best days!

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