Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.9


Sun has tripped over,
Upturned a pail of gold paint
Color permeates!

Wednesday, September 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Hine 17 September 2014

Great haiku! ...........

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 September 2014

a beautiful haiku, a painting with words.

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Abekah Emmanuel 17 September 2014

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

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Abekah Emmanuel 17 September 2014

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

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Abekah Emmanuel 17 September 2014

Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018

A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast.

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Glen Kappy 24 July 2017

p.s. valsa, you might like my poem, just 15th street. -glen

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Glen Kappy 24 July 2017

i like this, valsa! good imagination. -glen

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014

Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it.

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Daniel Brick 28 September 2014

What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them!

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