Valsa George


Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5) - Poem by Valsa George

Sun has tripped over,
Upturned a pail of gold paint
Color permeates!

Topic(s) of this poem: sunset


Comments about Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5) by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/18/2018 11:18:00 AM)

    A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast. (Report)Reply

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  • Glen Kappy (7/24/2017 7:31:00 AM)

    p.s. valsa, you might like my poem, just 15th street. -glen (Report)Reply

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  • Glen Kappy (7/24/2017 7:24:00 AM)

    i like this, valsa! good imagination. -glen (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (10/7/2014 12:12:00 PM)

    Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • Daniel Brick (9/28/2014 3:58:00 PM)

    What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them! (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (9/21/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Twilight witness for being relinquished from days toil. Sun also witness the same.
    Thanks for share. Regards.
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/21/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    Color permeates at sunset when sun tips over. Beautiful haiku. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/19/2014 11:21:00 PM)

    A vivid and artful picture you've painted. Very creative Valsa. (Report)Reply

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  • Dinesh Nair (9/18/2014 3:06:00 AM)

    The sun setting like a paint bottle turning upside down that permeates the colour of burning red has never been in any haiku like this! A wonderful write madam Valsa. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/17/2014 10:32:00 PM)

    And so is heart, the pail of love, when upturned the universal love permeates and the world becomes a work of art.
    100 out of 10.
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  • Abekah Emmanuel (9/17/2014 12:43:00 PM)

    Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Abekah Emmanuel (9/17/2014 12:43:00 PM)

    Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done! (Report)Reply

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  • Abekah Emmanuel (9/17/2014 12:42:00 PM)

    Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2014 8:41:00 AM)

    a beautiful haiku, a painting with words. (Report)Reply

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  • Diane Hine (9/17/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Great haiku! ........... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    Sunset well captured in this haiku......Valsa......great imagery (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/17/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    Great imagery presented in this haiku. Can be related to dusk or dawn when sky the painted at its best at the time of setting and rising sun. Happy writing. (Report)Reply

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  • Gajanan Mishra (9/17/2014 12:07:00 AM)

    I like the paint, thanks, (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 14, 2017


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