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Haiku. Sunset (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.9
Sun has tripped over,
Upturned a pail of gold paint
Color permeates!
Wednesday, September 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sunset
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2018
A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast.
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Glen Kappy 24 July 2017
p.s. valsa, you might like my poem, just 15th street. -glen
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Glen Kappy 24 July 2017
i like this, valsa! good imagination. -glen
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 October 2014
Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it.
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Daniel Brick 28 September 2014
What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them!
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Ramesh Rai 21 September 2014
Beautiful. Twilight witness for being relinquished from days toil. Sun also witness the same. Thanks for share. Regards.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 21 September 2014
Color permeates at sunset when sun tips over. Beautiful haiku. Thank you.
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Walterrean Salley 19 September 2014
A vivid and artful picture you've painted. Very creative Valsa.
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Dinesan Madathil 18 September 2014
The sun setting like a paint bottle turning upside down that permeates the colour of burning red has never been in any haiku like this! A wonderful write madam Valsa.
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Akhtar Jawad 17 September 2014
And so is heart, the pail of love, when upturned the universal love permeates and the world becomes a work of art. 100 out of 10.
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