Sun has tripped over,
Upturned a pail of gold paint
Color permeates!
Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!
Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!
Mind blowing description. Valsa has a unique control over words. Nice imagery! . well done!
A beautiful haiku on sunset nicely executed. Poem is brief but its boundary of feeling is vast.
Wow... that's a wonderful haiku painted by a sun....... Loved it.
What a delightful way to show the sudden burst of colors we so love at sunset. To think the lordly sun can be just as clumsy as we humans is reassuring! Even the great ones can have accidents - and what wonders result from some of them!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sunset well captured in this haiku......Valsa......great imagery