Friday, April 14, 2023

Haiku … The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

A walk in the sand
Seagulls fly high overhead
The wind in my hair.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Richard Wlodarski 17 April 2023

Like a scene from Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Or Woodstock. Such a great feeling of freedom captured in this poem!

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Sandra Feldman 16 April 2023

Beautiful brevity, feels as if we were there, with also the wind in our hair. Enjoyed, thank you!

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Pallavi Tripathi 15 April 2023

Wonderful write.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 April 2023

Beautifully put Jayne

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 April 2023

Thank you everyone. Much appreciated x

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Good one, Jayne. Enjoyed.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 April 2023

So much action and beauty in this lovely haiku. Much enjoyed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 April 2023

Beautifully inked. Loved it. Thanks.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 14 April 2023

With those seagulls flying overhead, you'll soon have more than wind in your hair! Enjoyed reading this. Five stars.

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😀😃😄

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 April 2023

I can just picture the scene Ron : ) lol Thanks for the stars! x

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