Half Wife Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Half Wife

Rating: 5.0


Like the half-moon in the night sky
Among so many twinkling stars
You are with me and my side
Like never ending problems
As my Half-Wife

Like the half glass of wine
Waiting for the two ice cubes
My life is waiting to embrace you
With same grace and brace

You are half because
I am the other half
Yet life is not full
As expected

Tuesday, January 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 19 January 2016

Half plus half makes one....one life..complete life....nice poem...thank u for sharing :)

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Kelly Kurt 19 January 2016

Ah, but a full life added to is that much more full

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 January 2016

Never ending problems with half-wife is wonderfully expressed in this wisely humorous poem. Finely drafted and shared.10

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 January 2016

Intezaar aur abhi, aur abhi, aur abhi..... Chand ko poora hone ke liye ik safar tay karna padta hai..Abhi to safar main ho... Chand zaroor apni urooj par hoga. khoobsurat nazm.10.

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Deepak S S 19 January 2019

Fantastic poem You are half because I am the other half Yet life is not full As expected

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Suzon Albert 18 January 2019

A wonderful poem, great way to say this half wife.

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

Great metaphor and it made me smile...great work Asim, so many poems I read today, Thanks.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 January 2016

Like the half glass of wine waiting for two ice cubes, my life is waiting to embrace you..Lovely simile. Another beautiful write from your pen. Full marks to you.

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Souren Mondal 20 January 2016

Two halves make one and in that there is the ultimate satisfaction of union in love.. A beautiful poem Asim. Thanks for sharing :)

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