M. Asim Nehal

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Half Wife - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Like the half-moon in the night sky
Among so many twinkling stars
You are with me and my side
Like never ending problems
As my Half-Wife

Like the half glass of wine
Waiting for the two ice cubes
My life is waiting to embrace you
With same grace and brace

You are half because
I am the other half
Yet life is not full
As expected

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Half Wife by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/2/2016 9:40:00 AM)


    Great metaphor and it made me smile...great work Asim, so many poems I read today, Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (1/28/2016 4:01:00 AM)


    Like the half glass of wine waiting for two ice cubes, my life is waiting to embrace you..Lovely simile. Another beautiful write from your pen. Full marks to you. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (1/20/2016 9:01:00 AM)


    Two halves make one and in that there is the ultimate satisfaction of union in love.. A beautiful poem Asim. Thanks for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/20/2016 4:17:00 AM)


    Intezaar aur abhi, aur abhi, aur abhi..... Chand ko poora hone ke liye ik safar tay karna padta hai..Abhi to safar main ho... Chand zaroor apni urooj par hoga. khoobsurat nazm.10. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/19/2016 4:56:00 PM)


    Never ending problems with half-wife is wonderfully expressed in this wisely humorous poem. Finely drafted and shared.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/19/2016 1:11:00 PM)


    Ah, but a full life added to is that much more full (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/19/2016 11:37:00 AM)


    Half plus half makes one....one life..complete life....nice poem...thank u for sharing :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 19, 2016



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