Per. Nig.


Happy Tomorrow - Poem by Per. Nig.

Pearls of dew on the grass
A pearl on my palm
Balm
Calm
Pass
The days of sorrow
Shiny, tiny glass
Shows
Happy tomorrow

(For S.W.)

2008/10/10


Comments about Happy Tomorrow by Per. Nig.

  • BEAU GOLDEN (10/27/2008 9:53:00 PM)

    this was short and sweet and pretty. (Report)Reply

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  • DEAD PLEASURES (10/24/2008 3:30:00 PM)

    Beutiful work
    Very delicate.
    =]
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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/23/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    wonderful dedication to a very special friend.....i love the way you put the words together (Report)Reply

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  • Janice Etienne (10/22/2008 4:46:00 PM)

    it's so cute how you put your unique unparalleled thoughts
    into little words that portrays a bigger picture
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  • Mamta Agarwal (10/21/2008 9:48:00 PM)

    lovely- so serene, wise and true. (Report)Reply

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  • Dorothy- A. HolmesDorothy- A. Holmes (10/20/2008 3:59:00 AM)

    Lovely!


    Dorothy
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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/18/2008 5:14:00 PM)

    You beautiful my dear! (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad MazumderErshad Mazumder (10/10/2008 10:26:00 PM)

    No words to say
    No words to hear
    You know better than me
    What do I want to say
    I know better than you
    What do you want to say
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  • Samantha Williams (10/10/2008 2:49:00 PM)

    Awwwww that was beautiful! ! ! ! You are very sweet! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (10/10/2008 2:29:00 PM)

    excellent...to have found so much joy and in such an effective way in a dew dropp so tiny is worth applause! 10! (Report)Reply

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  • Tsira Goge (10/10/2008 1:24:00 PM)

    Gentle and sensitive dedication... Your optimism sparkles... And yours 'tomorrow' also. 10...
    Tsira
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  • anne adam (10/10/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    cool poem i love it keep goin (Report)Reply

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  • Egi David Perdana (10/10/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    very well, why we need happy tommorow and always on happy endings? (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/10/2008 10:44:00 AM)

    superb...simple..sweet (Report)Reply

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  • C T Heart (10/10/2008 10:41:00 AM)

    Pass
    The days of sorrow
    Shiny, tiny glass
    Shows
    Happy tomorrow
    ---
    You have explicitely penned out a great piece of hope...i love your lines. a 10.
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  • Thad Wilk (10/10/2008 9:27:00 AM)

    Ah those pearls of dew upon the grass, a sign that days of sorrow - soon will pass!
    A pleasure to read Shiraz! *10 *! !
    Friend Thad
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  • Paolo Giuseppe MazzarelloPaolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (10/10/2008 8:58:00 AM)

    Why does one become a lyric poet? At the moment we can enjoy a poem like this. This style dèbuts in Greece, pass through Rome, China, maybe India, gets to the Italian Twentieth century...it passed through and got to Iran, too, only that I didn't know it. (Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (10/10/2008 4:49:00 AM)

    Your future is crystal clear, I love these pearls of wisdom that you write, well done,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • M M (10/10/2008 4:44:00 AM)

    A very tender poem which delivers a wise message.10! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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