He Breathed His Last Poem by sania harris

He Breathed His Last

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He was born crying
And people around him smiling
To lonely he was a friend
To every one he was godsend
A son of god that descend
To elders he would bend
He was all in the new trend
He always had a hand to lend
And on him you could always depend
But he didn’t know where all this would end
He didn’t know where this journey would end
He didn’t know when this journey would end
He didn’t know how this journey would end
But he knew that it was near
And that was his fear
He hoped it wasn’t fast
He didn’t want anything in haste
But fate came its way
And it neared – the doomsday
All were in prayers
They were all aware
But no one could stop the nightmare
They couldn’t say it was unfair
And on my lap
Within the smallest gap, without a trap
He fought for his last breath
He met his master of death
And there he lay- smiling
And everyone around him crying

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2008

'HE MET HIS MASTER OF DEATH' Great write Kid. You are just beautiful. What a rhythm, terrific rhymes......every other poet can draw a leaf from u......GOD BLESS U.

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Koyel Mitra 19 September 2008

Enjoyed the climax in your poem.Only one suggestion, avoid repetition.Kind regards, koyel

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Thomas Viruvelil 14 September 2008

You have the imagination and capability to express emotions those qualities making you a poet but your language has to improve and should learn the power of words

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