Mary Nagy

Rookie (11-08-1970)

He Said He Thought I Saved Him - Poem by Mary Nagy

The celebration ended
as we dragged ourselves to bed.
My heart is brimming over
with the words that he just said.

We were sleepily talking
as we so often do.
To no suprise he leaned over
and said ''I really love you''.

Of course this is the routine.
We always say ''Goodnight
I love you and sleep well''
but he didn't stop there tonight.

He said he thought I saved him
from what he would have been.
He said he was so thankful
that I found him way back when.

I felt my heart would burst
from hearing such sweet love.
I've often felt that I'm the one
who owed my life above.

Of course I didn't save him.
His soul is way too pure.
The truth is I'm the lucky one
of this I know I'm sure


Comments about He Said He Thought I Saved Him by Mary Nagy

  • (11/8/2009 10:19:00 PM)


    I very much like the way you write, Mary; the feeling, the meter, and the rhyme. Ans the stories you tell.

    I'm glad to be back with Poem Hunter.

    Frank Gardner
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  • (1/5/2006 8:09:00 AM)


    Oh for that as one feeling. I think couples save each other, especially ones that love each other as you and your partner obviously do. Sweet little write Mary.
    10 from smiling, gonna get there again, if it kills me! Smiling Tai
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  • (1/3/2006 12:40:00 PM)


    Mary,
    This one brought tears to my eyes. Very touching. Simply lovely. A 10 from me.

    Shannon
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  • Linda Hepner (1/3/2006 1:48:00 AM)


    What a wonderful confession of mutual love! (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2006 1:11:00 AM)


    Nice CJ, lovely poem sweet good like you, , , , have a great day dave xxx (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 8:33:00 PM)


    A man gets lucky sometimes and finds the woman that can make the world make sense! ! (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 5:42:00 PM)


    This is a beautiful piece Mary and has the pace (and meter - ha, ha) that suits the sentiment and words so well. You just will not accept compliments though, will you?

    Laffin'.
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  • (1/2/2006 5:14:00 PM)


    Another example of 'behind every good man is a better woman'

    Rusty
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  • Ernestine Northover (1/2/2006 3:32:00 PM)


    You'll have my tears flowing Mary, if you're not careful, Another very moving piece from you. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 3:25:00 PM)


    Such warmth and honesty, written
    by someone with an extremely big
    heart. It is so good for me to read
    your work at the moment. You seem
    inspired. Thank you.
    Kindest Regards Slim. x.
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  • (1/2/2006 3:09:00 PM)


    I 'm a big fan of this one. Very romantic. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 3:07:00 PM)


    Deep sentiment made yet more powerful by the 'believability' of the characters portrayed. Every verse offers a heartwarming and touching picture of some kind. Delightful write, Mary. (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 3:05:00 PM)


    Wonderful and giving! Insightful and romantic as well! I like this poem. I can relate.
    LSP
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  • (1/2/2006 2:58:00 PM)


    Thats really nice Mary, very humble. Moyax (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2006 2:55:00 PM)


    So sweet, Mary...You are both the lucky ones. Nicely done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 2, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, January 5, 2007


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