My heart cries out for you. The empty echo
leaves such a feeling of blue. Nothing I can do.
Time weeps for you, as the notes play out their
tune. And the little chick a dee, cries out in such
a lonely melody. As the willows and the trees,
bow in the breeze. And it seems all creation is
missing you. The rain fills the river beds, with words
that long to be said. But even the reeds that used to
whisper so beautifully, seem to be crying instead. And
the flowers just nod their heads. As the memories flash,
and I meet the end of the path. Heart cries, left to search
through a book that's already been read. Keep thinking
this can't be, where the author's led. Keep trying to turn
the page, but the winds won't change. But nothings the
same. Steeples stand tall with beautiful, glass that's stained. Pages of the book all frayed, held and left to stay. With it's bittersweet message, that remains.
A marvelous write full of images and great poetic expression.
A deeply poignant and touching poem. Each and every line has been woven to echo the feeling of loneliness and emptiness.
WOW! Marvelous poem, dearest Becca! May I put 5 Stars Fullest again on Top
Indeed, like Kostas said A FIVE STARS POEM FOR SURE! I do hope my comments stay here and that you can read both responses. Thank you so much for sharing, dear friend
With its bittersweet message that remains. True Beauty of a poem! Marvelous words! I have enjoyed very much this scintillating poem, Becca! Happy to find you here.5 Stars for this gem and to my favourites.Heart cries, loveliest captured! God's Blessings.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A magnificent poem... great rhythm. I appreciated fabulous use of imagery.5 stars and to MyPoemList