Heart Of The Sea Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Heart Of The Sea

Rating: 5.0


Atmosphere full of fear
Hard to feel the heat of tear
Heart of the sea turns into steel
That dream is only so real

I Iaid my pencil down
Can't bear no more sound
I only sold the dawn
To gain for you a star

The story teller's eyes
Faked one more tale
About a diary full of lies
Shield me from myself

A nightingale singing the old ballad
A mother entwining her daughter's hair
The father is out teaching his son
How to obey the lord's willing

My life became miserable since I
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings
You've been pulled to the flames
As long as I lived wishing for this moment

This is me breathing what your wings blow to me
Nothing will turn the air pure again since you flew
Into the dark I found myself waiting for you
I'm not an eager seeker i'm just waiting for you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 11 January 2010

Excellent, brother, what a masterpiece, very deep and meaningful, I really understand what you are saying, from the bottom of my heart, since I speak your language...Great poem, you clearly got your message across...Keep it up! 10+++++(Sorry, brother, I have been having problems with the site when it comes to rating, I try and try, many times, but it won't go through...) Love and Peace, Romeo

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Stephanie McKean 11 January 2010

This is amazing. Good Job!

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Lady Grace 11 January 2010

owww...this is so nice espeially the last part..cheers..

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Marieta Maglas 11 January 2010

Started to dream of the butterfly's wings nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism 10/10

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Omar Ibrahim 12 January 2010

it's very musical that's what i liked the most....nicely written...thanks for sharing.

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Eyan Desir 12 January 2010

Nice write enjoyable read

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Merna Ibrahim 12 January 2010

Splendid poem! I loved it specially the first stanza, , , Good Work! 10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 January 2010

This is really a good poem, Hassan, perfectly reflects the title. Imagery is another feature of this beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. Best wishes. Naseer

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Justin Unanue 11 January 2010

A dream. Conducted in the Heart of The Sea. Good poem.

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