Heaven Among Roses Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Heaven Among Roses
Roses red with the flames teeming of fire,
Mirrored their poise glowing free in their briar.
Their hearts rousing in poise are mounting higher
To heaven's dainty air they do aspire.
Aspiration revolved like wind they ride
Much onto estate promising well in tide.
In clouds of flawless beauty they abide,
Favour from providence is on their side.
Dawn streaming in their veins with light to shine,
Of vision victory stays in their line.
Perch onto dark never will they from light,
For stay they will in their spirits in flight.
Air borne to ascend, roses red hit the sky,
Smog-viewed such has been to mediocre eye.
The structure of your rhyme works extremely well in this beautiful sonnet. The rose is the perfect flower to be focused on in a sonnet. You have crafted this piece with love and passion. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson
It can be composed as a good song by a fine singer and music conductor. Good song poem. Enjoyed. Thanks a lot.
You can add a melody to this one. Just write write write write. Well done Rhyming to poetry is like fish to sea The more it rhymes the better it will be
it sounds like a song......beautiful song.........i liked the rhyme.....good job..keep on writing and show us more! ! ! !
I enjoyed the way this poem flows... and the topic lends itself to a warm, tranquil reading. Your vocabulary compliments your devices, as well. Heaven on earth can be this easy... forget the mediocre eye.
to me 'heaven among roses' is an image of 'relationship- the presence of man with rose (female) is like heaven'. the experience of balance between nature's law...
nice poem, but try not to repeat the same word in the same paom and directly after each other: aspire and aspiration
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Let quote here - 'Love is much like a wild rose, Beautiful and calm, But willing to draw blood in its defense.” Such is the vivid description of Rose Its really amazing to fantasize From all the angles you see this rose. Wonderful is the feelings felt. Smooth flow of a gigantic river This is so good to read and feel.