Heenal Vora

Veteran Poet - 1,245 Points (27 november 1999 / Mumbai)

Heaven On Earth - Poem by Heenal Vora

Remarks on calenders,
Homeworks not completed,
Assignments and projects delayed...
Exams tension,
Scoring marks is an achievement,
Greatest problem is horrible open house...
Lazy PT exercises,
Boring history lectures,
Confusing science preacticals...
Matters that take place,
Love affairs on going,
Teasing one another...
Throwing paper balls and hiding,
Cracking jokes on one another,
Irritating teachers above limits...
Feeling of achieving award
When teachers say,
'Worst class ever seen'
Innocence of telling lies when your mistakes get caught,
Sleepy class every morning,
Passing chits,
Waiting for reccess bell to ring...
Adventurous picnics and educational field trips,
exciting annual days,
festival and birthday parties,
the last is memorable farewell...
most innocent student,
most talkative student,
scholar student of the class,
dumb student of the class,
monitor of the class,
complain box of the class,
who were you? ? ?

Topic(s) of this poem: school

Form: ABC

Poet's Notes about The Poem

missing those golden days... please be back in my life...

Comments about Heaven On Earth by Heenal Vora

  • Chinedu Dike (2/23/2018 7:37:00 PM)

    Nostalgic feelings of the good old school days are aptly captured in the poem. Rich flow of thoughts with captivating images elegantly brought forth with clarity of mind. A beautiful creation Heenal. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report) Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (5/5/2017 8:46:00 PM)

    Every individual who has gone through this mill will later feel same way and reminiscing the days gone by would mostly bring tears to eyes, because they were so unique, thrilling, innovative, exiting, adventuring, accomplishing, notorious, and still innocent. Thanks for sharing the interesting poem. Congrats for being the member's PoD. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2017 11:56:00 AM)

    Hi Heenal,
    Congratulations on selection as poet of the day. And for this Lovely Poem, , , ,
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  • Tapan M. Saren (5/5/2017 9:20:00 AM)

    I love the way you related the title to the poem. Really beautiful poem. Nice work. I too miss those days. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren (5/5/2017 9:17:00 AM)

    Wah! I loved the way you related the title to the poem. And the poem is really beautiful. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (5/5/2017 8:56:00 AM)

    a nice poem of childish goings on at a time when time seamed to stand still? ............well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (5/5/2017 7:15:00 AM)

    This is a very nice poem about early days in school. Everyone wishes to go back to that time of carefree life and masti all day long with friends. Thanks for sharing. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (5/5/2017 7:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem about school days Heenal. Congratulations on being member of the day.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Akhtar Jawad (5/5/2017 5:09:00 AM)

    How nicely you can send back an old man like me to his past student life. Congrats and thanks as well for writing and sharing this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Reed (5/5/2017 3:59:00 AM)

    Keep writing because poetry is a great way to record all those little memories that can be forgotten as time passes, acting as a kind of informal diary of your life. Well done for being poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/5/2017 2:38:00 AM)

    good write...congrats on being poet of the day; can be polished further... (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (5/5/2017 2:07:00 AM)

    It looks like a running commentary on or a collage of interesting moments of school days we can easily relate to. Thanks for sharing the poem, Heenal. (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2017 1:27:00 AM)

    Such is the life of teachers and students. Beautifully encapsulated in this artistic write. It would be intriguing to read a sequel. How some of those much maligned students turned out to be some of our leaders (both good and bad) . Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Well deserved! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/5/2017 12:59:00 AM)

    Homeworks not completed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (5/5/2017 12:38:00 AM)

    I terribly miss school days too.... congrats on being chosen.... a big 10 Heenal....... (Report) Reply

  • Connor Whyte (3/11/2016 12:05:00 AM)

    Great write magnificent art, it seems everyone labels someone in some sort of way whether it's good or bad I find labeling in general to be bad but you have a way with words and I truly like this piece. Keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/7/2016 1:45:00 AM)

    Nicely written...I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Abderrahmane Dakir (1/1/2016 9:29:00 AM)

    Real life, we used doing those things, Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (11/13/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    study deep and too with full heart now it pays you in future (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2015 4:36:00 AM)

    Focus on studies at this stage may be rewarding in the long run and it will also bring about positive advancements in every sphere. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

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