Hello Heart Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Hello Heart

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Hello Heart, I am in silent world now,
Heartily I am waiting you come and vow.
Heaven-sent we were I am free from worldly life,
Hell and heaven is depend upon past actions is rife.

Hello, I was your wife, till I am a soul,
Healthful services I provided as burning coal.
Hateful work I never did, you loved me,
Hastily death came to me I couldn't see.

Hard case was it when my soul left the body,
Hardship you got with mum, son and daddy.
Handful rice I couldn't bring even my hand,
Halfwit can't imagine how soul play in land.

Hand can't do against our Karma or action,
Honorable law says, 'Action has same reaction.”
Hence you should do best and benevolent to all,
Hazard will never come, be aware of gall.

Hello, you are a soul and body is your car,
Havoc comes to your body your soul goes far.
Heal your sorrow; rebirth is sure as birth is,
Help other and pray God to get peace in ease.

Saturday, June 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Poet here describes about a soul who was a wife. Soul takes birth age to age either in male body or in female body as per its past action known as karma. Here a soul, who was in female body, after death is speaking, “Oh? Dear husband, now I am in silent world. I am waiting you here, come and have vow for good deeds for next birth. We were both heaven-sent. Now I am free from worldly life and you will be free too. Hell and heaven is depending upon our action. I was your wife. I provided you healthful services as coal provides light and heat by burning itself. Suddenly death came to me which was unknown. You, son, and daddy (my father - in-law) were weeping. I came here in bare hand. Stupid person do not know the role of soul, birth or rebirth. Honorable law or karmic law says that action has same reaction. You do well. Beware of gall. You are a soul, don’t think body. Soul can’t be destroyed. Rebirth is sure, don’t fear, help other, and pray God and peace.” This is the theme of the poem in brief. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.

Glossary
Heart - beloved person
Heaven-sent - providential
Healthful - beneficial
Hasty - hurried
Hard cash - cash of hardship
Halfwit - stupid person
Hazard - danger
Havoc - widespread destruction
Gall - a feeling of deep and bitter anger and ill will
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 13 June 2015

All actions have reactions. A truth we should all keep in mind. A wonderful parable with soul saving, spiritual advice

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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2015

Karma that writes the fate of the next life, a nice poem................10

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Valsa George 13 June 2015

Our reward in the other world is judged by our actions here on Earth! We came empty handed and leave the world empty handed. But our actions follow us. A great reminder!

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 June 2015

Every body is bound to his karma and karma is taking care of our lives.So keep your karma clean and pure to enjoy a blessed life in next birth.Nicely done.

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Ramesh Rai 21 June 2015

Mind is always active when heart is always pacific. Heart always prays for peace in mind. Beautiful presentation.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 March 2019

It explains the philosophy of life in simple words and this simplicity comes straight from heart, heart to heart. Words are words, but they echo heart-beats here.

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

We hear the heartbeat and your hello saying through beautiful words in this lovely poem sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2016

picture of manisha uniyal xNice.. 15 Jun 2015 by manisha uniyal | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xExcellent read, laden and layered, with unique metaphors. This is a treat to read spiritually. I have only spiritual experiences with God, so I do not know which this is. But I have enjoyed this sublime poem. Thank you for sharing. 15 Jun 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xNice write, beautifully worded! 15 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Hastly death came to me! Life and death. Going into the other world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jaishree Nair 05 September 2015

Help other and pray God to get peace in ease...........If only the world pays heed to this advice ........It would be a better place to live in...... Another great write. Thanks....

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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