Our lips parted for a moment
Her velvety hands guided me
To her bosom taut
Sweet and fragrant.
A little grapefruit spoke
Of her love and longing
To my shivering palms
Through the nakedness
of her silent desires.
A vivid depiction of desire. Very passionate. Beautifully written with compelling imagery.
Excellent title- -I was browsing through your collection of poems for one to read and Voila! This beautiful poem said Read Me! ! ! Read Me! ! ! ! And I did and wow this was a very sensual read! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=+++++++=+++++=
A beautiful poem on love, longing and desire has been astutely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10
Thank you Kumarmsni Sir. Your kind words of appreciation make my day. Obliged
Sweet and fragrant. A little grapefruit spoke Of her love and longing To my shivering palms....sweet expression! A lovely poem...Top score!
Thank you Dilipji for your kindness in appreciating my poems