Her Velvety Hands Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Her Velvety Hands

Rating: 5.0


Our lips parted for a moment

Her velvety hands guided me
To her bosom taut
Sweet and fragrant.
A little grapefruit spoke
Of her love and longing
To my shivering palms
Through the nakedness
of her silent desires.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2022

Sweet and fragrant. A little grapefruit spoke Of her love and longing To my shivering palms....sweet expression! A lovely poem...Top score!

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2022

Thank you Dilipji for your kindness in appreciating my poems

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Thomas Case 09 November 2021

Fantastic imagery

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 February 2022

Thank you, Thomas

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 July 2019

A vivid depiction of desire. Very passionate. Beautifully written with compelling imagery.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2019

Thank you, Rose Marie. Obliged.

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Susan Williams 09 May 2019

Excellent title- -I was browsing through your collection of poems for one to read and Voila! This beautiful poem said Read Me! ! ! Read Me! ! ! ! And I did and wow this was a very sensual read! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=+++++++=+++++=

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 May 2019

Thank you Susie. Obliged for the time and for the comments.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2018

A beautiful poem on love, longing and desire has been astutely and incisively delineated. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 December 2018

Thank you Kumarmsni Sir. Your kind words of appreciation make my day. Obliged

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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