Hesitation Poem by merna ibrahim

Hesitation

Rating: 5.0


This feeling really provokes me,
because it erases the sanity&the glee.

It makes your thoughts in a strong conflict, as the harsh sea waves.
And the hesitation make you so numb, so, you don't know how to behave.
And the other thoughts come out from their caves.
But finally, you are obliged to decide, and send the other options to the grave.

In certain situations, you feel hesitated
and when you can't decide you feel frustrated.
It needs a great confidence to defeat this feeling,
But if you became decisive, you would be good at dealing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zeinab Sherif 22 June 2009

good job, keep it up.10marks

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Lovely craft written...meaningful one!

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good work......i enjoyed reading it......! waiting for more such beautiful poems......

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Muhammad Ali 17 June 2009

nice, simple well written! 10..

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Eyan Desir 16 June 2009

Good write................................10

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 November 2009

a good analysis of HESITATION! a Right&Meaningful done! a CERTAIN 10 to defeat the HESITATION/

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Cecilia Nicoletti 11 October 2009

THOUGHTFUL POEM - NICE WRITING FOR SUCH YOUNG POET- GO ON.

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p.a. noushad 31 July 2009

the life has certain meaning, it will reveal before us, must have confidence ever, i like your poem.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

Yes Merna... the hesitation... a dilemma all over, specifically in teens. Frustration defeated by significant influence until you agree for the deal… good write.. keep it up -Jaleel

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Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

it is awesome write...penned with skills

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