Rajnish Manga

Gold Star - 177,759 Points (September 10,1951 / Meerut (UP) / Presently at Faridabad (Haryana) , India.)

बस्ती बस्ती घोर उदासी (Hindi) - Poem by Rajnish Manga

बस्ती बस्ती घोर उदासी........... पर्वत पर्वत खालीपन
मन का हीरा बिका कोड़ियों नीलाम हुआ तन का चंदन
इस धरती से उस अम्बर तक.. दो ही चीज़ अनोखी हैं
एक तो तेरा अति भोलापन...... एक मेरा दीवानापन.

Topic(s) of this poem: earth, emptiness, innocence, loneliness, love, sadness, sky

Form: Free Verse

Comments about बस्ती बस्ती घोर उदासी (Hindi) by Rajnish Manga

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/21/2016 10:21:00 AM)

    Mujhe lagta hay yeh kavita Bhagvan aur Insan per likhi gayee hay, Bhagvan ka bholapan aur insan ka deewanapan. Aysa ho ya na ho per yeh bahut hi sunder kavita hay. (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (9/21/2016 12:08:00 PM)

    Thanks for your short but a wonderful critique on this poem. The man, with his limited knowledge, can't go into the rationale of what goes on in his life or the world around him whereas God remains impartial and fair to each one of us.

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (5/31/2016 3:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful four liner with deep meaning.
    I loved the last line particularly - एक तो तेरा अति भोलापन एक मेरा दीवानापन.
    Only when we look at the vast sky and its generosity, do we we realise how
    empty, lonely, powerless and mad we are.! Great lines from a great poet, Sir!
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  • Atul Rajput (12/18/2015 4:29:00 AM)

    inspired by Kumar Sir's Poem, Changed words but still beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/1/2015 1:33:00 PM)

    Wah wah kya baat hai...........It reminded me the famous lines of a shayar to whom someone asked can you tell what is life and love in two to 4 lines and prompt came the reply:
    Tujhe Mohabbat Karna Nahi Aata,
    Mujhe Mohabbat Ke Siva Kuch Nahi Aata,
    Zindagi Guzarne Ke Do Tarike Hote Hai,
    Ek Tujhe Nahi Aata Aur Ek Mujhe Nahi Aata.
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 10:55:00 AM)

    Thank you for reviewing the poem in such a wonderful and poetic style, Md. Asim ji.

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/1/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    Sandal paste of mind and diamond of spirit both speak about mood of mental and physical state in this wise poem shared. This is nice, wonderful and wise sharing definitely...10 (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 10:53:00 AM)

    Thanks for your nice and analytical comments, Kumarmani ji.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 31, 2016

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