जीवन हाय फिसल जाता है (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

जीवन हाय फिसल जाता है (Hindi)

Rating: 5.0

कुछ प्रमाद में
कुछ प्रमोद में
कुछ विवाद में
कुछ विनोद में
मित्रो जीवन कट जाता है
चलते चलते घट जाता है
कुछ प्रारब्ध में
कुछ प्रयास में
आपस की इनकी खींच तान में
काल खंड कुछ गल जाता है
पूरब से उगता है सूरज
पश्चिम में वह ढल जाता है
इसी प्रकार नित आते जाते
जीवन हाय फिसल जाता है.

Saturday, October 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: day,life and death,night,pleasure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2016

Rajnish Ji, It's a great poem, no body wants to drop a catch, but what the fielder can do if ball is slipped from his hands.

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Rajnish Manga 29 October 2016

Highly grateful to you, Sir, for such a nice appraisal of the poem. Thanks a lot.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 October 2018

This poem has special attraction that attracts me to visit second time. It is really a beautiful philosophical poem so nicely executed.

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Rajnish Manga 27 October 2018

I'm greatly obliged. Your continuous support provides necessary inspiration to me.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 07 July 2017

bahut hi sundar rachna sir.....

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Rajnish Manga 08 July 2017

आपके प्रशंसात्मक शब्दों के लिए बहुत आभारी हूँ, अजय जी. हार्दिक धन्यवाद.

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M Asim Nehal 10 November 2016

Chahe jeet ke. chahe haar kar, ye samay bhi guzar jaata hai...Sach much mein jeevan magar फिसल जाता है...Ati Uttam kavita, Full of wisdom, Thanks for sharing it Rajnishji..100+

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Rajnish Manga 11 November 2016

Kavita par aapki sarthak sameeksha ke liye haardik dhanywad, Mohd. Asim ji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2016

पूरब से उगता है सूरज पश्चिम में वह ढल जाता है इसी प्रकार नित आते जाते जीवन हाय फिसल जाता है. .. really, Life is full of cycle and risk. Well presentation. Thanks...10

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 30 October 2016

Very beautifully expressed...10 It's a great joy to read your verses my dear poet Rajnish Ji..

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