Crimson Love

Rookie - 70 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

Home - Poem by Crimson Love

Fingers slide,
down an immaculate frame,
Eyes watch,
my thoughts do the same,
Lips quiver, in the heat of such desire,
my lust is burning, no ice could sate this fire,

Every inch your fingers touch,
Scorches my skin,
branding me with your love,
Movement no longer slow,
so much more delibrate,
falling upon anything,
we need but only touch,
perhaps a longing ear,
as moans escape,
the lips I need,
I fall back down,
into this heated embrace,
and lie my ear over,
that in which I took.

'Your heart so much more,
than a simple organ......
it's the very home,
I long to reside in.'


Comments about Home by Crimson Love

  • (12/8/2011 9:03:00 PM)


    Most Extreme poem! Many images within the lines, brings my heart to see
    so much love and beauty in you!
    most excellent penned poem! 10+++++
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  • Sajna Kailas (12/8/2011 12:15:00 AM)


    deep emotions of love! loved it! (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2011 2:31:00 PM)


    A great poem of the powerful feeling of love.
    A fantastic write as always.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 7, 2011



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